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- WOW! Jade, what a fantastic blog to read through and enjoy! I have really enjoyed looking over your blog. It's very visual, engaging and shows loads of really thoughtful creativity and excellence in the use of media to explore your concept and communicate your ideas.
- Every post is visual, and when I read your thoughts, there is a real sense that your clearly and genuinely engaged with the task - not just going through the motions. You seem to enjoy what you are working on- and this comes through in your posts. They are actually 'interesting' to read.
- Excellent post on 'Concept' - I love your idea, and I really am looking forward to seeing the finished product from your group.
Well done!
some suggested ebi's:
- - Song Details - What you currently have here is really just the song from Youtube with one paragraph about it. I wonder if you could make this post more interesting - maybe some key lines / lyrics... Or maybe you and your group talking to camera about what the song means to you...
- - Storyboards - the Animatic is great. To really show anyone marking your blog that you have an excellent knowledge of technical terms, perhaps come back to your storyboards (the paper copies) and include more technical info - comments on lighting, camera movement... framing / composition, etc... etc. You cannot see any of this info in the animatic. I think you need to make sure your storyboards contain lots of detailed technical info and then scan them in - along with your animatic.
- Check the post on 'advert design's - looks strange on your blog - massive gaps when you scroll through.
Overall, this is Excellent Jade. You should feel really proud of what you have done and you have clearly invested loads of time on your work. I am really looking forward to seeing your concept come to life in your music video!
SJA
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