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- Jade, I have really enjoyed reading through your blog, as it's so organised and really interesting to read your thoughts and analytical posts. There's some very impressive work here, and you should feel very proud of the work so far for many posts.
- Your Audience Research was excellent - I am please Survey Monkey was so effective for you - you just need to complete post 19 by scanning in (or taking a screen grab) of your actual survey
- Your Record Label research was also excellent - visual posts, with evidence of thorough investigation
- Great to see a blog with all 3 posts on Theories completed - I hope understanding these has helped you and your group think about your own music video
ebi:
- Post 12 - Low Budget Videos - could perhaps be enhanced through maybe creating a tagged youtube version of the videos, where you explain what effects / features were effective and why - or maybe a voice over commentary if you have time. This would really enhance your blog
- Post 13 - Good mood board - just needs a paragraph where you explain how artists working within this genre choose represent themselves and why
- Post 15 - Genre research - conventions - missing?? This is a big post where you should really show off your ideas / research, and technical skill with the blog
- Post 16 - CD cover analysis - I could only see two (very excellent ones...) - I think you need to do one more
- Post 18 - Advert research - A brilliant advert for Gwen Stefani - but no analysis?? Needs to have 3 adverts analysed
- Post 19 - Audience Questionnaire - scan in
Overall Effort: VG / Very Good - but with some IN (Improvement Needed) - just at this stage. We need to see this complete by Friday 7th Oct. I have to say, after marking some of the others, I have really enjoyed reading your blog Jade, make sure you spend study periods really being fussy with each post to ensure you come out with amazing grades. It has loads of potential - you just have to keep on top of it.
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